fantasy book reviews science fiction book reviewsThe Kingmakers by Clay and Susan GriffithThe Kingmakers by Clay and Susan Griffith

The VAMPIRE EMPIRE series is an interesting combination of almost-steampunk, alternative history and fantasy all wrapped together. Clay and Susan Griffith have used a solid mixture of adventure, intrigue and world building to create a vibrant tapestry as the background for the story. In The Kingmakers all of this grows more and more intense as war rages and the battle for the survival of two different races grows more desperate.

Adele, now Empress of Equitoria, has unleashed her armies on the European continent despite the setbacks in the seasons and the loss of some of her more important weapons of war. Gareth, in his Greyfriar persona, is in the midst of the fight and doing his part to help the humans drive the Vampires back from the South of France. The weather, which favors the vampires, has not helped and things are growing more and more desperate for Adele’s trusted retainer Anhalt, the commander of the Equitorian Forces.

Clay and Susan Griffith have done a really good job of creating a flow of events that seems natural. Adele and Gareth have been given clear choices about what they can do to control their lives. The challenge going forward is that now that Adele is Empress, the rash, often foolhardy choices she made are unacceptable. This makes for interesting considerations because some risks, in spite of her authority and power as the monarch, are simply too great to be undertaken.

Senator Clark, Adele’s jilted former intended, wages war on the North American continent with his typical disdain for the ethical constraints that would impair his ability to succeed. Truly, for him, the ends justify the means and if a few innocent lives are lost in his path to glory, that is an acceptable price to pay. The underpinnings of his massive egotism are never discussed, but I was left wondering what trauma or neglect he might have endured to be so wrapped in his lust for glory and power that he can brook no argument. The phrase “if you are not with me, you are against me” resonates in my head when I think of Clark.

The Kingmakers is a worthwhile addition to the VAMPIRE EARTH series. The story is fraught with danger, intrigue and a romance between two people who have no business being together — though, to be honest, the relationship between Adele and Gareth began to be almost cloyingly sweet in this book. There are some arguments for political and social constraints that are being set aside as superfluous that to me don’t stand the common sense test. Setting that annoyance aside, the themes of loyalty, revenge, greed and obsession are writ large and make the story something exceptional. To what lengths would a man go to avenge the slaughter of a dearly loved child and spouse at the hands of a predatory race that preys on his own? That’s one question among many that permeate this novel and make The Kingmakers profoundly good despite some logical flaws.

Vampire Empire — (2010-2015) Publisher: In the year 1870, a horrible plague of vampires swept over the northern regions of the world. Millions of humans were killed outright. Millions more died of disease and famine due to the havoc that followed. Within two years, once great cities were shrouded by the grey empire of the vampire clans. Human refugees fled south to the tropics because vampires could not tolerate the constant heat there. They brought technology and a feverish drive to reestablish their shattered societies of steam and iron amid the mosques of Alexandria, the torrid quietude of Panama, or the green temples of Malaya. It is now 2020 and a bloody reckoning is coming. Princess Adele is heir to the Empire of Equatoria, a remnant of the old tropical British Empire. She is quick with her wit as well as with a sword or gun. She is eager for an adventure before she settles into a life of duty and political marriage to man she does not know. But her quest turns black when she becomes the target of a merciless vampire clan. Her only protector is The Greyfriar, a mysterious hero who fights the vampires from deep within their territory. Their dangerous relationship plays out against an approaching war to the death between humankind and the vampire clans. The Greyfriar: Vampire Empire is the first book in a trilogy of high adventure and alternate history. Combining rousing pulp action with steampunk style, The Greyfriar brings epic political themes to life within a story of heartbreaking romance, sacrifice, and heroism.

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    JOHN HULET is a member of the Utah Army National Guard. John’s experiences have often left a great void that has been filled by countless hours spent between the pages of a book lost in the words and images of the authors he admires. During a 12 month tour of Iraq, he spent well over $1000 on books and found sanity in the process. John lives in Utah and works slavishly to prepare soldiers to serve their country with the honor and distinction that Sturm Brightblade or Arithon s’Ffalenn would be proud of. John retired from FanLit in March 2015 after being with us for nearly 8 years. We still hear from him every once in a while.

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