Oath of Fealty: Begins a new Paksenarrion trilogy

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At the end of The Deed of Paksenarrion, the mercenary Duke Phelan discovered that he’s the heir to the Lyonan kingdom — the only kingdom jointly ruled by humans and Elves. As Oath of Fealty starts, he has to give up his dukedom and he recommends his captain Arcolin to be elevated in his place. To make things even more interesting, one of his other soldiers, Dorrin Verrakai (who had fled her family legacy decades earlier), has been called back to claim leadership of the evil Verrakai dukedom which had been seized by the king of Tsai when the previous duke tried to assassinate several members of the ruling family. As she struggles to root out the blood magic that has tainted her family holding for centuries, Stammel discovers dangerous signs that evil is encroaching on another front, far to the south, through mysterious tainted weapons and possessed followers of an evil god.

Elizabeth Moon writes epic fantasy and her Deed of Paksenarrion is frequently hailed as an heir to THE LORD OF THE RINGS because she is as interested in building a world as she is in telling a story. As Oath of Fealty starts a new trilogy in the world of Paksenarrion, it assumes a familiarity with the world and its history. Oath of Fealty actually starts before the action in The Deed of Paksenarrion ends, but retells that action from the point of view of the smaller characters who will take center stage in this installment. Therefore, a lot of the major plot points are recapped without an infodump.

Moon excels at writing real characters. As you read, you follow the characters as they react to the huge shifts in their roles and responsibilities with understandable frustration, trepidation, and pride. She crafts her work with such loving detail that the reader emotionally attaches to the characters. As well, she manages to create several distinctive cultures and societies with an attention to detail that makes them all vibrant and individual.

Oath of Fealty has a bit of FBITTSSAT syndrome — First Book In a Trilogy That Serves as a Sequel to Another Trilogy. But even with the obvious structural limitations placed upon this book by its location within the storyline, it is still an eminently well-crafted book. Reading Oath of Fealty is like watching your grandmother set out the antique chess set you have played on for years and then having her explain the new powers that all the pieces have acquired. Dukes are now kings, sergeants are now dukes, and captains are now sergeants.
And Paksenarrion… well, she’s barely in this book at all.

This is a beautiful chess set, but shifting all the characters into new roles and responsibilities means that not a lot of plot happens; however, I can’t remember the last time I enjoyed reading an introduction this much. This is the work of an artist and storyteller. Moon sets up the action and intrigue to sustain an epic trilogy while still having a complete story arc within this volume. If you have not read The Deed of Paksenarrion, I would recommend starting there. If you have read it, you will find yourselves happily slipping back into this world with no problems….
Pawn to c8.

The Deed of Paksenarrion — (1988-2014) Author’s Description:  Paksenarrion Dorthansdotter, headstrong daughter of a sheep farmer on the north edge of the kingdom, dreams of being a hero out of legend, of fame and magic swords and great deeds. When her father tells her she must marry the neighbor’s son, she runs away from home to join the mercenary company her cousin told her about. But military life and warfare aren’t anything like her daydreams… yet she holds to both her duty and her dreams. In the end, she pays the price that heroism demands and becomes the paladin who saves a kingdom… but the journey is longer and darker than she ever imagined. She has to confront and overcome her strengths as well as her weaknesses… and her triumph redeems more than herself.

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RUTH ARNELL (on FanLit's staff January 2009 — August 2013) earned a Ph.D. in political science and is a college professor in Idaho. From a young age she has maxed out her library card the way some people do credit cards. Ruth started reading fantasy with A Wrinkle in Time and The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe — books that still occupy an honored spot on her bookshelf today. Ruth and her husband have a young son, but their house is actually presided over by a flame-point Siamese who answers, sometimes, to the name of Griffon.

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  1. This series is just being put out on audio and Brilliance Audio sent me Sheepfarmer’s Daughter to review. I’m really looking forward to it!

  2. It will be interesting to see what you think of the first book. I read them all as a trilogy in the omnibus trade edition, so I have very little concept of them as individual books.

  3. Well, I wasn’t planning to start this quite yet, but I volunteered to proctor standardized testing at one of my kids’ schools this morning (it’s my spring break) and they made me sit in the hall with a “Quiet! Testing!” sign for 3 hours. Fortunately, I had my MP3 player in my purse (or I would have revolted), so I started Sheepfarmer’s Daughter. Lots of military life minutiae (marching, stew eating, trench digging, and weapons training), but Paks is a good character.

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