Silence of the Soleri by Michael Johnston
I gave a 2½-star rating for Michael Johnston’s Soleri, and was hoping to see some improvement in the sequel, Silence of the Soleri (2021). Unfortunately, the book tipped in the other direction, so much so that I gave up at the halfway point. As usual with DNF reviews, this will be brief.
The problems here were pretty much the same as I noted in my review of book one. Characterization was thin, prose was only adequate, plotting felt scattershot and unbalanced. Several scenes I wasn’t sure of the point.
And worse here than in book one was the logistics — multiple times I had no idea how settings related to one another, how many people were involved in scenes, how people were escaping notice, etc., making for an incredibly frustrating read.
I started considering giving up about a quarter of the way through, but pushed forward in hopes things would improve, that maybe problems with logistics were singular or that characters would be more fully revealed, but by the halfway point, when things had not gotten any better, I decided that was a fair enough amount to make a judgment.
Not recommended.
Wow, it sounds like me.