Blade of Dream: Explores choices and consequences

Reposting to include Marion’s new review.

Blade of Dream by Daniel Abraham

Blade of Dream is Daniel Abraham’s second book in his KITHAMAR trilogy, though to call it a “sequel” is a bit of a misnomer as rather than directly following the events of Age of Ash, this new story parallels that first book’s events in time, actually intersecting with a few scenes here and there but mostly, or at least somewhat, acting as a stand-alone novel. That said, while one can read this without having read its predecessor, having read book one will better inform certain events, particularly at the end.

Kithamar is the sprawling city setting, one dividend into several districts with some clear class (and some racial) distinctions. Both books begin with the death of the city’s ruler, Byrn a Sal, and then flash back some months beforehand to introduce our main characters, in this case Elaine a Sal, daughter and heir to Byrn; and Garreth Left, eldest son of a major merchant family that has — unbeknownst to others — fallen on hard times.

Garreth is going to be forced to marry into an alliance to help strengthen his family’s fortunes, but a chance encounter with Elaine and a single night together changes all that. Without knowing who she actually is, Garreth falls for her and so backs out of the impending marriage, joining his childhood friends as a member of the bluecoats — the city guards. His storyline, along with trying to find a way to reunite with the mysterious young woman he met, involves trying to figure out what he wants to do with his life, coming to some sort of resolution if not reconciliation with his family, and performing his duties as a guardsmen, which includes a plan to try and take down Aunt Thorn, a (possible the) criminal underworld boss. Meanwhile, Elaine and her father move into the Palace after the death of the prior ruler, and Elaine has to adapt to her new role, and the sense of obligation and loneliness it brings. Worse, her father seems to be changing before her eyes, and she worries there is some dark secret at the heart (readers of book one know she is not wrong).

As with that first book, Blade of Dream is a slow burn, an interesting distinction between Abraham’s fantasy novels and his more propulsive science fiction ones like THE EXPANSE. Whichever genre he works in, though, and at whatever speed, Abraham always presents us with richly developed and complex characters who grow and change throughout the course of whatever tale they’re involved in. That holds true here as well. And again, as is typical with Abraham, it doesn’t hold true just for the two main characters but for each we meet, from Garreth’s friends Kannish and Maur to their guard captain to Elaine’s best friend Theddan and even quite minor characters such as several other guardsmen, a servant in Garreth’s house, and others.

As for the two main characters, part of this story, as with the first book, is a coming-of-age tale, albeit with older characters as well as characters from more privileged realms of the city. That privilege, though, doesn’t mean they have a sense of agency in their own lives, similar to the more impoverished characters from Age of Ash. Both Garreth and Elain are young people with all the confusion of self and place in the world that entails, a confusion that is only exacerbated by their entanglements with each other, issues that arise with their friends, and of course the “darkness” at the core of this fantasy story. And these issues arise and are resolved in the messy, sometimes incomplete, and often bittersweet way they often are in real life. Here, for instance, is Garreth re-entering his once-home:

Daniel Abraham

The subtle scent of the lemon oil that Serria had the maids all use brought back floods of memories he hadn’t realized were locked away until that moment. Being no taller than a table, stretched out on the floor while his mother hummed to herself in the next room. The one maid — Kayyla? Kavva? — who’d worked for them the summer Garreth turned fourteen and the doomed longing he’d developed for her. The sound of Vasch clopping down the hallways pretending to be a general leading a great army … That the moments were lost made them sweet … [They] took on a patina of melancholy because they could never happen again … The boy who rested in the sunlight and his mother’s unconscious song was gone … Everything rose and was lost. Every decision ended the other paths that a different choice would have opened. Including all the lives in which this might be Garreth’s home.

One of my favorite aspects of this book is that focus on “decisions” that we get at the close of that passage. Several times Garreth, for instance, tries to claim he did “what he had to.” The kind of statement, justification, one often hears. But here he’s called on it — whether he did right or wrong, nothing he does is inevitable; he does not what he “has to” but what he “chooses to.” If the first book in this trilogy focused much of its time on grief and loss, here I’d say the exploration is into choice and consequence. (I’d also put community and history and two other key subjects).

Nor is it just the young who get to wrestle with such concerns, as we get several thoughtful and often moving speeches from older characters revealing their own problems, though not the same ones coming as they do in the latter stages of life rather than the early ones.

The plot, while not “action filled” in the usual sense still has more than a few chase and fight scenes as well as several scenes of heightened tension and is as richly complex as the characterization. It’s also built on a wonderfully evocative foundation that I won’t detail here but is not just fascinating in its logistical explanation but also beautifully conveyed in terms of language and style. Abraham has always written smooth, vivid prose, and his dialogue is always somewhat paradoxically wholly natural sounding and also at times wonderfully eloquent (the guard captain has an utterly fantastic speech near the end I won’t ruin by quoting). Here, he also uses the change of seasons that mark various sections of the book to dip into a gorgeously lyrical and more poetic style (one that, while I could be wrongly remembering this, seems to be something he is more prone to in his fantasy than his sci-fi). Here, for instance, is the city in winter:

The promise of thaw remained only a promise. The city pulled into itself, retreating from the cold like a snail folding itself into its shell. Only not entirely. People skated on the river, sliding across the white expanse for the simple joy of the movement. Little stands set up in the squares with iron stoves like tiny forges made to warm cider and wine at three coppers for a mug.

Honestly, reading this book, the way Abraham lets it takes it time to develop, kind of has the feel of sipping a cup of hot cider or wine in a cozy room while snow falls softly outside. I’ll grant the pace isn’t for everyone, but personally I love its gradual immersion into place and people. Actually, while this might not be a “blow one’s mind” book, there is little if anything I didn’t love about Blade of Dream. Pace — yep. Language/style — yep. The cubist sort of trilogy structure — yep. Characters — yep. Theme — yep. I can only think of two things I’m unhappy with it: that it ended, and that I’ve another year before book three arrives.

~Bill Capossere

Bill did a good job of addressing the plot in this, the second book of Daniel Abraham’s KITHAMAR trilogy, so I won’t recap. Like the first book, Year of Ash, Blade of Dream is a rich, immersive experience filled with compelling, layered characters.

As we’ve said before, with the KITHAMAR trilogy, Abraham chooses to tell three stories, distinct from each other but connected, that take place during the same time period, a pivotal moment in the history of the city of Kithamar.Each book contains one story. Characters intersect with no idea of the importance of that intersection. In Blade of Dream, those few overlap scenes are crucial for raising the stakes, at least in the case of one particular character.

At the heart of this story are its characters, not only Garreth left and Elaine a Sal, star-crossed lovers who must figure out their own respective destinies as well as decide if they can ever be together. Garreth is the scion of a wealthy merchant family, fleeing an arranged marriage, and Elaine is literally the princess of the city. Their story has center stage more or less, but other characters are equally interesting. There’s Captain Senit, a world-weary member of the City Guard, and his feud with crimelord Aunt Thorn. Elaine’s cousin Theddan, while not deeply drawn, is a beam of wildness and joy. Even characters who occupy little time on the page, like Garreth’s would-be bride Yrith and her nurse are well-drawn, with goals and dreams of their own.

It’s customary to talk about second world fantasies set mostly in a particular city as if the city is a character. In this case, the city is a character. Abraham opens each section (the book covers four seasons in the city’s life) with a passage devoted to the cityscape itself. This is not lyrical license, it’s part of the story.

I will say that I didn’t warm up to Garreth until he joined the guard, but I’ll also point out that I disliked James Holden for quite deep into the first EXPANSE book. Both times, the characters grew on me and eventually won me over. In the case of this book, it was mostly the other characters, plausible, well-drawn, each with their own motivations and beliefs who kept me going until I decided rich-boy Garreth was okay. (Which, without committing spoilers, was when he apologized to someone.)

You can enjoy Blade of Dreams without having read Book One, The Year of Ash, but to get the full effect of what Abraham’s doing here, I recommend reading it (or at least read a few reviews).

~Marion Deeds