Reposting to include Marion’s new review.
System Collapse by Martha Wells
The first thing to know about Martha Wells’ System Collapse is that if you can’t dredge up memories of its (chronological) predecessor, Network Effect, you’re going to want to refresh yourself either by a reread (fun enough) or skimming a few reviews, as System Collapse picks up directly afterward and really feels like it could have just been part of Network Effect (you know, had it been written at the time).
The reasons are multiple for wanting to remind yourself of events: the plotting, as noted, starts nearly immediately after the close of Network Effect, there are several character groups one is going to want to keep straight (a colonist group, another colonist group, a surprise colonist group previously unknown, a group of Murderbot humans some of whom are relatively new, the corporate bad guys who themselves have their own factions, the university good guys who may or may not arrive in time to be of help, etc. But the most important reason to refresh your memory is because System Collapse is really built around Murderbot’s PTSD (while the “system” of the title can have several referents, one is certainly Murderbot’s own system) stemming from a key event in the prior novel. So it’ll help if you remember just what that event was and why it was so traumatizing.
The action all takes place on the same planet from Network Effect, with revelation of the aforementioned surprise group of extra colonists prompting an excursion by Murderbot and his humans to the polar region where this splinter group — long out of contact with the other colonists — supposedly exists. The key is to get there and give the colonists their various options before the corporate villains (Barish-Estranza) show up and put them into indentured servitude (voluntarily or involuntarily). Of course, getting there first and convincing the colonists before the bad guys arrive would make for a pretty slim novel, so as one might expect, things don’t go quite so smoothly. The corporation is already there, they’re devious and deceptive as corporations are wont to be, and they’ve brought along their own SecUnits, meaning poor Murderbot would be outgunned even if it were operating normally.
And it is absolutely not operating normally. The first clue we get to this are the number of “redacted” moments that appear early on in the narration (one of my favorite, most cleverly devised, elements of the series is how Murderbot’s speedy brain’s ability to multi-task combined with its self-diagnosis programming allows it to act as both a semi-omniscient third-person narrator and a first-person narrator simultaneously). Eventually we’re told the cause of this, and the rest of this storyline focuses on Murderbot’s attempts to deal with the trauma. Or really, for the most part, its attempts to avoid dealing with it, despite the proffered assistance from its “annoying” friends: the humans under its protection and its AI friend ART. This personal sense of uncertainty, its sense of vulnerability and shame at that vulnerability, combined with its fear/guilt that said uncertainty will cause it to let down its friends and allow them to come to harm; all of that serves to further humanize (or “person-ize”) Murderbot, as well as pop up the tension when it comes to running and shooting and fighting. Although less of that occurs here, making this a more introspective story than many of the prior ones. As well as more meta, given that storytelling plays a prominent role in the attempt to stave off a corporate victory (and the referenced idea of disinformation makes it sadly topical as well).
Meanwhile, the usual snark and humor runs throughout, even if tempered by that vulnerability and uncertainty, making this just as entertaining as all the rest of the series. Obviously, this is not the place to start the series (if you mistakenly picked it up thinking it was a standalone/first work, stop reading now and go back to begin with All Systems Red). So anyone reading System Collapse is well aware of the series’/character’s many strengths. Suffice to say they’re all on display here. Just remember to catch up on what happened just beforehand before diving in.
This is less of a review of Martha Well’s 2023 MURDERBOT novella, and more a recommendation based on something Bill said. Bill’s review covered the book excellently, but I have a couple of comments, with a possible spoiler for Network Effect in paragraph three.
When I first started System Collapse, I stalled out on it very early. I had read Network Effect early last year, and in between I read Fugitive Telemetry, so when System Collapse started, I was totally lost. My solution was to re-read Network Effect and immediately start System Collapse. Bill mentioned that the books could almost work as one longer novel; I’m here to say they do work as one longer novel, plus being a real indulgence to have so much Murderbot in one place.
Bill mentioned that Murderbot is dealing with PTSD, which is flawlessly handled in the story. I think a component of it is survivor guilt—Murderbot is struggling with the loss of Two, which it barely knew and which sacrificed itself to save Murderbot and the humans. Like Bill, I think the title, System Collapse, fits a couple of items in the story. The first is simply Murderbot itself, and how it sees itself in the aftermath of the events in Network Effect. That’s one system, certainly. It’s also possible that the corporate system with its ruthless exploitation, is being eroded away to the point where it is nearer to implosion than most people realize. Another “system” in the books is that of the SecUnit creation and exploitation, and the whole question of “rogue units.”
System Collapse delivers another stellar story in the series, edging us closer to the secrets Murderbot hasn’t even acknowledged to itself yet. I recommend it, and I recommend a re-read or at least of skim of Network Effect first.
~Marion Deeds
I was really struggling with this one until I figured out that is takes place right after Network Effect. I mean, I was still captivated, but I couldn’t figure out what MurderBot was struggling with.
I read Network Effect a while ago, so I’m going to use one of our holiday gift cards to get it and read it again.
Yeah, I had a bit of confusion for at least the first quarter of the book. It wasn’t so much the placement of events just didn’t seem like Murderbot had his expected personality. But I ended up loving the book and the adventure.
I ended up liking this one pretty well, but the first half to two thirds did seem to progress very slowly, thanks to Murderbot’s internal monologue dominating the narrative. A goodly amount of that being Murderbot second guessing itself and questioning its substandard performance. Once Barish-Estranza showed up the pace picked up quite a bit and stayed more lively up through the finish.
Update: I’m about halfway thru my reread of NETWORK EFFECT, which is a pleasant treat in itself. Eagerly reading so I can pick up SYSTEM COLLAPSE again, refreshed.
And it’s fun to spend time with ART and MurderBot again, even (especially?) when they’re fighting.
I’ve thoroughly enjoyed the whole Murder Bot series. It’s witty, intelligent and speaks to more than any other Sci. fi. I’ve read in a long time. The narrative really develops as we see through Murder Bot’s eyes the foibles of humans and the maturing manner in which Murder Bot deals with problems. The character development of Murder Bot is deftly done. This series is outstanding and highly recommended.