Ordinary Monsters by J.M. Miro fantasy book reviewsOrdinary Monsters by J.M. Miro fantasy book reviewsOrdinary Monsters by J.M. Miro

…And the way a child looked at him in the harbor at Alexandria as he climbed down the gangway and into the haze. All this, all this and more, would vanish from the world with his ceasing, all this ineradicable beauty that now lived only inside him would be lost, moments as fragile as coins of light on water, and this more than any other part of it made him feel alone and sorrowful and frail…

2022’s Ordinary Monsters, Book One of THE TALENTS, by J.M. Miro, is a dense, complicated, visual feast of a book, filled with magical children, enigmatic adults, and kinetic action scenes. The stakes are high and so is the weirdness, set against a gritty, coal-smoke-tinted 1880s England and Scotland, as “the talents” wage an increasingly desperate battle to stop the drughr, an unspeakable monster from another world, from rampaging through this one.

The story starts with a runaway woman finding an infant who glows like starlight, and whose light can burn or heal. Soon, we meet Alice Quicke, a private detective who has had her own brush with the weird as a child, and Charlie Ovid, a boy who can heal from anything, even death. At Cairndale Manor, as estate in Scotland, Dr. Belghast gathers talented (magical) children together—for protection, he says, but that’s not the whole truth.

Part of the truth is that Cairndale holds an orsino, a rift between our world and another. A glyphic, one of the oldest and most powerful of the talented ones, holds the orsino closed, but this glyphic is dying, and a new one is needed to keep the worlds separated.

Everybody is seeking the shining boy, Marlowe; from the man made of smoke to the gun-toting detective Alice, to the veiled Mrs. Harrowgate, to Walter, the hairless, nocturnal litch who preys on the indigent in the streets of Limehouse.

Miro’s tale plaits together many storylines from many characters, and they stride across the late-Victorian landscape like colossi: shooting, fist-fighting, knife-fighting, fighting through the carriages, and the roof, of a train, killing each other with ropes of magic dust, healing each other with strange magics. Marlowe is at the center of the story, but he is only one of a clutch of strange and wonderful children.

  • Komako is a dustworker, shaping mundane dust into weapons or bonds
  • Eleanor Ribbons, “Ribs,” can make herself invisible
  • Oskar creates a golem-like companion out of dead flesh,
  • and Charlie, who heals from any wound.

This six-hundred-page book is complicated, moving backwards and forwards in time, shifting among characters who mean to do good, those who say they mean to do good, and those who act from arrogance and selfishness. Whether it’s Marlowe’s glowing skin, Oskar’s “flesh giant” companion, Alice Quicke with her men’s clothing, her pistols, and her watchful eyes, or Brynt, the giant silver-haired woman who protects Marlowe when he is a baby, characters are described with imagination, strangeness and virtuosity. The story reminded me, at times, of Philip Pulman’s HIS DARK MATERIALS trilogy—in terms of tone, not because “dust” is a plot element. There are similarities, but while “good” and “evil” and laid out pretty clearly in Pulman’s work, Miro’s world is not as straightforward, and things aren’t always what they first seem. Miro’s prose is nearly cinematic, and I do wonder why Disney+, Netflix or Prime hasn’t optioned this series yet.

This is my first five-star read of the year, and I’m glad it came along so early. The book ends on a cliffhanger, but I have already started The Bringer of Dust, the second book in the series.

Published in 2022. Charlie Ovid, despite surviving a brutal childhood in Mississippi, doesn’t have a scar on him. His body heals itself, whether he wants it to or not. Marlowe, a foundling from a railway freight car, shines with a strange bluish light. He can melt or mend flesh. When Alice Quicke, a jaded detective with her own troubled past, is recruited to escort them to safety, all three begin a journey into the nature of difference and belonging, and the shadowy edges of the monstrous. What follows is a story of wonder and betrayal, from the gaslit streets of London, and the wooden theaters of Meiji-era Tokyo, to an eerie estate outside Edinburgh where other children with gifts―like Komako, a witch-child and twister of dust, and Ribs, a girl who cloaks herself in invisibility―are forced to combat the forces that threaten their safety. There, the world of the dead and the world of the living threaten to collide. With this new found family, Komako, Marlowe, Charlie, Ribs, and the rest of the Talents discover the truth about their abilities. And as secrets within the Institute unfurl, a new question arises: What truly defines a monster? Riveting in its scope, exquisitely written, Ordinary Monsters presents a catastrophic vision of the Victorian world―and of the gifted, broken children who must save it.

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  • Marion Deeds

    Marion Deeds, with us since March, 2011, is the author of the fantasy novella ALUMINUM LEAVES. Her short fiction has appeared in the anthologies BEYOND THE STARS, THE WAND THAT ROCKS THE CRADLE, STRANGE CALIFORNIA, and in Podcastle, The Noyo River Review, Daily Science Fiction and Flash Fiction Online. She’s retired from 35 years in county government, and spends some of her free time volunteering at a second-hand bookstore in her home town.

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